Hiya Guys

[leidana]

Hiya Guys,

I've been told i should post stuff on here instead of just reading it all

So silly me have decided to drag something out that I had written one day - hope you all don't mind

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As he looked over my way
Seeing my face streaked and red,
He saw a lonely tear roll down,
Looking over he gently touched
It as it came to rest on,
The curve of my cheek.

It hung there held by some unknown force

Sorrow filled his eyes,
As he reached over,
And looked at me

All the time he was asking me
Mutely,
With his sorrow filled eyes
How much did I hurt?
Was it all from him?

The answer I gave,
Didn't seem to help,
For he still wanted to know more.
He stayed there asking me silently,
With his sorrow filled eyes.

To break the silence I looked away
And suddenly the tear dropped
Landing on his hand
That had found its way to my knee

Looking down I could see his hand there,
Holding me,
Not allowing me to rise.
Unable to leave,
I gave into the depths of despair

And found that I couldn't walk away.

[Turook]

Very cool

So when are you putting that app in?

[corlag]

ooohhh another poet in our midst. wicked!

good stuffs. I like the descriptive wording.

[Mazia]

wuwu /waves to Corlag good seeing you about man

[corlag]

heya mate how's things? restless as a caged ravasauros myself.
its nice to troll around and see friendly faces.

[Aamasie]

Hi Leidana,

Thanks for posting the poem, it was lovely.

[Turook]

Nice tangent there Maz

[Creac]

Found it, Lei

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and words. There's a lot to take from your poem and it was certainly timely for me for you to mention it. Appreciate it.

It's certainly worth bumping for people to see again